ThePineapplePirate's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[On the Clouds]

It's good

I think it fits, very peaceful sounding. Good job

PuffballsUnited responds:

Yes! I succeeded!

[(CHS) Rebirth]

It was really good at first.

But then around 44 seconds the voices came in. Now personally I think the piece woulda been better without that, or maybe you could have had them a bit more in the background or something. But to me it feels like they really take away from a good piece.

ChaosDragon004 responds:

Interesting, I'll be sure to keep that in mind. I don't want to butcher the song. Thanks for your honesty.

I really did this song as a test run to see if I would make more songs like this in the future. If this one doesn't work out, I'll probably try one more time. We'll see all in due time.

[It's a Quiet Town]

Not entirely sure the name fits

I don't really get "quiet town" from this piece. Don't get me wrong it's a nice composition, but I feel like there's too much going on with the drums and everything.

[Field of Bones - Orchestra Mix]

Not Bad

My only suggestion is maybe add some strings to follow the piano a bit in the intro, the drums seem to kinda drown it out a bit and you need a bit more there to make it stand out.

Good job though, really like the name.

AngelofPeace responds:

Thanks for reviewing, I need all the feedback I can get.

[.:The Awakening:.]

Nicely Done

You know you should look into some other programs for composing. This piece would sound great with some better VSTs behind it.

GronmonSE responds:

I know, I wanna get East/West.

Thanks again :)

[.:Uncertainty:.]

I like it

Personally I would replace the instrument playing along with the piano in the intro with something else, or just drop it all together. Apart from that though I think this is really nice, good job on it.

GronmonSE responds:

I think that's a cheap pizzicato. Will do.

Thanks for the review :) I submitted a song before this one that I think you might like better by the way. No pressure or anything though ;)

[Augusts Piano Work]

Something Missing...

First off, I do like the piece. But it seems to me that you really didn't do much with bass notes. My advice would be to add more to the lower half of the piano, or to add a cello or something to just hold some notes in bass. It would help establish the chords a bit more and could do a lot for the piece.

[Momentum]

I like it

Very nice, but I'm not entirely sure the title fits it.

dante993 responds:

Thx for the review ^^
You know, the title "Momentum" was already taken, and I couldn't think of anything better :(